Making Changes: Creating Final Copies

Do Now:

Get out your draft with edits & revisions & start making changes!

Directions:

2. Together as a class we will use to Add-ons to help with revision and editing

        Add-ons:  Proofread Bot (Don't just take the suggestions with out reading them it will mess up                                                       your essay!!!

                        SAS Writing Adviser

3. Make changes to your essay using Proofread Bot and SAS Writing Adviser  In SAS Writing Adviser I recommend focusing on: passive voice, relative clause, repeated words, all verbs, vague words

Check out this helpful article!!!5 Words to Avoid and What to Use Instead
Struggling with your conclusion? Try describing your president's character traits.  Here is a link to a list: List of Traits

If you finish you have a few choices:
-Practice Vocab & 3 Branches on Quizlet here are the links:3 Branches Quizlet, All Government Vocab, Modified Vocabulary, ELL Government Vocabulary
-Practice Government using Sheppard Software U.S. Government Sheppard Software Games
-Practice the 50 States
-Practice the Presidents Sheppard Software Presidents
-President Quizzes President Trivia Quizzes
-Online President Activities President Activities
-State Activities Mr. Nussbaum State Activities

Final Copy due Monday.  Must be printed and stapled in  the following order:

1. Final Copy

2. Bibliography

3. Draft

4. Edit/Revision Peer checklist

If you have it please include you paragraph organizer and research organizer